Monday, June 8, 2009

Need nelp w/ title

Sometimes i wonder
Wether those searching eyes
Are searcing for me
Or someone else
Mine are searching for you
That is certain
I wonder if those things you say
The way you act
Are your way of showing
You care
Or if you're just being yourself
Because that's just the way you are
Your smiling eyes
Your bell like laughter
All this and so much more
If only you would tell me
What these signs mean
Make the first move
Because deep down inside
I love you dearly
But i've been hurt to many times
To risk that hurt again
I don't want you
To think less of me
The opposite
I want you to let me into your heart
So i can put myself back together
But there is not much time left
So make it quick
Because soon
I will be
No more

4 comments:

Maddie said...

first of all... this doesnt sound like your other writing. it shows maturity and a longing. you mispelled a few words, but i know thats just part of you. i must say that dan is one lucky boy :D (this is about him... right?) i like the structure and how it shows your thoughts and yearning in a mature way. i like it a lot noodle!

Mackenzie said...

haha longing....lol yeah i mispell words alot, hehe u think so...yeah it is. haha thnx!!

Bela said...

I enjoy this new style =)

No, seriously, I love it. All of it. As I said on the CWP blog...slurrrrr =D You'll get it eventually!

Keep this up! And you know if you ever need to talk, we're here =)

Mackenzie said...

awww thanks bels!!haha =)