This is all so
Confusing
Crazy
Heavy-heartening
One minute
You seem to love me
The next
You don't
I wish you would tell me
What was bothering you
Or at least the truth
Don't lie to me
I hate that
I can see right through you
I can read you
Like an open book
I know there is something
You're not telling me
Something that would put
All the pieces
Of the puzzle together
Then at last
I could rest in peace
And happiness
And joy
I won't hate you
Or think bad of you
If you just tell me the truth
You're crushing me
Suffocating me
Making my love for you
Fade
So please
If you love me
Don't lie
Tell the truth
9 comments:
um.. GREAT WRITING. even thoughh we both hate the situation. itll all come togetherrr soon. and show this to the person...
y thank you...yeah hopefully it will cuz im like DYING here! um well how am i supposed 2 cuz i have no way 2 reach him and even if i did i probs wouldnt...
yea i know... blah :(
well i sent an email to tons of ppl including him so...but i dnt want him 2 think im like a jerk or something...
he wont. dontt worry <3
<3 ok i hope so!
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call me when you find out...!
caroline knows what this is poem is about :) actually its more like :( anyways, it's REALLY good!!! It's really deep and i'm sensing some metaphors that i am not able to figure out. It's making me depressed, cuz your poem is totally making me feel your pain!!! (which is probably what you were trying to do... but.. okay i'll stop talking now... Good job :D)~♥♪♪♫☼ Caroline
haha ily caroline!! but yeah im sad =(
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