Surely you knew I existed
Surley you knew I was there
Then why did you always ignore me
Even when you said you cared
We were perfect for each other
Thats what all my friends said
I agreed with them
But I guess you didn't
You used to love me
Or at least thats what you told me
It was a joke to you all along
Why couldn't I see?
So now things are different
I have no one to love
If you ever came back
We could fly like a dove
4 comments:
doves dont soar....jk (but seriously, i don;t think they do...)
fine bela thinks the same thing so i'll change it.
MAybe you could call it soaring love or sumthing like that use a phrase from the poem and add the word love to it
I don't think you should say dove at all because you're not rhyming for the rest of the poem anyway- well, not the second stanza.
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