A toss of the ball
A swing of the raquet
The pop as it flys of the strings
The bounce of the ball
As it hits the clay courts
And seeing it fly back to me
The forehand
The backhand
The volley and serve
The alleys
The net
The base line and net posts
All come together
When you play one game
Tennis, the game I play
11 comments:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! maybe loook at the last stanza though, it is a little rough at the end.
ok yeah i didn't know how to end it. do you like the part " All come together when you play one game or should i change the whole thing?
maybe do something like
All come together
When you play one game
Tennis, the game I'm playing
that is an idea. idk, maybe ask one of the teachers.
oh yeah maybe something like
All come together
When you play one game (or my game)
Tennis.... and then i don't know what to put here
Love it toos o wooooooooooooooo pa shea
ask a teacher.
no i hate asking teachers
i'll come up with you :)
no!!!!!!!!
well maybe.........
Very nice! I love the rhythm in this one!
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