Monday, July 21, 2008

A Snowy Forest

The jingle of harness bells,breaking
and adding to the silence
awaken the forest on a snowy evening

The birds that have just settled down
in the warm comfort of their homes
awaken with an angry shriek

The deer bolt gracefully away
into the cover of the
frost covered pine trees

A fox peeks out of his burrow
to see what all the commotion
is about

A sleigh rides by
the harness bells jingeling
A man winks at the fox
who quickly goes back into his burrow

14 comments:

-blogger2 said...

what kind of guy "winks" at a fox? weirdo...

Mackenzie said...

SANTA!!!!!!!

-blogger2 said...

santa? then he's kinda sketchy if ya ask me.... ahwinkidywinkwink

Mackenzie said...

haha yes he does like to draw things lol

-blogger2 said...

ooooooooooooooookayyyyyyyyyy...
(insert smiley with one eyebrow raised in flabbergastedness)

Mackenzie said...

haha flabbergastedness thats a kool word

-blogger2 said...

yea i say cool stuff like that...

Mackenzie said...

because ur so cool right?

-blogger2 said...

yuppppppp

Mackenzie said...

haha right.........

Mackenzie said...

would this work as a mirror poem?

Gina said...

To answer your question, you'd have to rearrange a lot of stuff to make a mirror.

Maddie said...

gina is right. i really love this one though, you did an insanely amazing job at writing this. i love it!

Cynical & Sweet said...

Hey. I just found you're blog, and I really like it. I think it's cool. Although, a guy winking at a fox does seem kind of questionable. Later!
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